Friday 31 March 2017

Ko Ahau Poem



WALT
IALT use the language feature of metaphors

Success Criteria
I can write a metaphor for each line of my line Sharp inspired poem
I can give reasons for why I chose the words I wrote

My Reflection
For my ko ahau poem I had to make up some metaphors in sentences for our buddy class in Christ Church. My favorite line was I am a bright racing Lamborghini with lots of gas for learning. I choose this line because I just like the ending which was with lots of gas ready for learning. Next time I will need to improve on my I am because I couldn't think of other metaphors to make my sentence more interesting.





1 comment:

Unknown said...

You have done a great job here Louisianna. I can tell this poem is about you!